Knocked Down

Fri, 01/03/2014 - 19:52 -- naomi_w

It rises

and falls

only to rise again.

 

A circadian pattern,

until one day it falls too hard.

 

Shattered and torn,

It attempts to rise.

 

But this time, 

no light reaches the surface.

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