Understand Me

Mon, 04/08/2013 - 22:19 -- munnesa


United States
42° 58' 24.1896" N, 78° 43' 56.568" W

The nights when I cry,

With my eyes all wet,

No one to talk to,

About the feelings I get,

No one I can trust to tell something yet,

I can see the dark clouds and how they're set,

Its seems like a huge puzzled net,

Somehow I see my face in the clouds,

All hopeless, dry and not at all proud,

Could it be? could it be?

That i can never set my thoughts free?

Its way different when I think about it in reality,

Need someone to give me a certainty,

This is how I feel, And this is what I see,

That no one can ever totally understand me .

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very emotionally driven
its good to have someone there to understand you
do you have soemone you can talk to? this poem does a great job in expressign your feelings

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