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You're cold shoulder, bipolar high roller disorder
Is sympathetic, arithmetic, epidemic kinetic
Cope the rope and tie up the noose
Pull it too tight the limb will break off loose
Then you’re stuck in a bed all left in a pan
Don't be a vegetable to fend like a hand.
Bite the gum till it bleeds out numb
When you’re done draining out hope you’re proud…
You did it twice-
The crowd grows loud!
Nurses run in to mend the wounds
Your tongue is gone a minute to soon…
Paraplegic now you're dead
Are you in heaven or have you just bled?
Why are you so cryptomatic, paramagnetic, drawn to both sides?
You've gone to the brink to rot on both lines.
Goodnight my friend, goodbye my dear... I'll love you always forever right here <3
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lizardoa21
This piece is interesting and i get the idea but the words you used were weird. Such as on line 2 i didn't understand at all since arithmetic is a math term, kinetic involves movement and all of them i just don't see how they connect. Also cryptomatic i can't find its meaning at all. They all sound good together and is pleasing to the ear but it takes away from the meaning.