THE SMOOTH BREAK UP

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How was it so easy to change on me

We use to be so deeply in love

That when you were sad,

I cried

When I was hot ,

You Sweated

When i thought,

You reacted

If you had an enemy

I Would Attack

So answer my question 

How could you change on me like that?

Maybe I shouldn't have ignored the signs

You started coming home late

When you cooked dinner you only made one plate

Haven't even asked me have I ate

But still I decided to stay 

You showed me everyday that you were trying to escape

But my heart Kept begging you to stay

But Now You're free to go away,

I think I Just Need My Space.

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