Rain Clouded Mind

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United States

I opened up my narrow sighted mind

In hopes that it was you that I find

with my luck the sun will not shine

you continue to give me no signs

 

the rain pouring down it hurts my ears 

cant hear anything over my inner fears

i cry out the rain that floods my mind 

this is love of a very different kind

 

the raiin pouring down I cannot see

all I wanna do is turn and flee

instead i chase you through the flood

alway, you turn on me in cold blood

 

the rain leaves my mind lost 

always wanting your love at any cost

never knowing when to stop the lies

the rain cries out my eyes.

 

 

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