Messed Up System


Our education system has got to do better.

I know nothing is perfect, but we can not go on like this forever.

Kids using profanity instead of the intellect God gave them.

While the principle only prays he makes it through the a.m.

The introvert bringing a gun to school because the bully will not quit.

Teachers look carelessly saying, "I don't get paid enough for this!"

Her clothes are too tight and his pants hanging to low; it's the norm.

Why not just finally get a well-mannered uniform?

I have more complaints, trust me I can go on forever!

And my words will not stop until our system does better.

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