Dumb Love

Sun, 12/22/2013 - 17:03 -- 14hoska

I love him,

He loves me,

But how could I be so dumb?

Why can't I see?


This is wrong,

But it feels so right,

To be in his arms

And to hold me tight.


The other boy will never be him,

But he is yet so sweet.

And so are other men,

No other man will make my heart beat.


So, I'll leave the other boy.

Because he does not deserve to be treated like a toy.



Seem like your story and my kind going same way. I  sorry for what happen. Hope that you will someone better.

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