DETERMINATION

Your determination and commitment is your life,

How far are you willing to go, willing to fight?

Commit to your husband or wife, stand by their side for life,

Commit to school and follow the rules,

It's only human for you to be afraid or shy,

But your options aren't to sit and wail if you fail 

Its ok to ask for help from a real friend,

Because they and your family will support you until the end,

But be your own role model,

Set yourself to full throttle,

Be your own sun that shines in the afternoon,

Dont listen to "The Sky's the Limit", when there's footsteps on the moon.

This poem is about: 
Our world
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Comments

Shanie828

Nicely said !!!! 

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