That Day

Location

20772
United States
38° 47' 32.262" N, 76° 45' 24.2532" W
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That day she wasn't doing too well, we could tell. She seemed a little depressed, we said she needed rest. We had no idea what was inside her head, so she did what we all dread. She cut herself and dropped dead. And I said, as I stood above her grave; what would have happened that day, if someone had only said, i'ts okay?

Comments

cierrablue

11 years ago

This poem represents so many young lives that have been lost to unfortunate suicides. I just want everyone to know that even I feel a little depressed sometimes, but it will go away and although it's cliche, it will get better. don't end your life now because that will not only kill you, but it will kill the ones who love you as well. And they are there.

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