You left me that day.

You left me that day. You told us to grab a bite to eat. When we put our key in thekeyhole, there was something different. IT NO LONGER TURNED... I wondered as a 3 year old young girl about what this all meant. I heard the voice of a woman who I was unfamiliar with. I smelt her cheap perfume from the other side of the door. Tell me, who was she ? The one who replaced mommy. You gave me up for her ? What a deadbeat. I haven't heard from you in years, was that your way of telling me to go ?


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