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When words can't explain my frustration on how a boy can change your mine completely
and wouldn't care of the consequences that goes alone with it
How the girl is left crying while the boy smile of compassion knowing he got a piece of you and didn't care to leave a piece for someone else
It hurts me to see one of my friends get played
her heart took control instead of using common since
A girl would fall to her knees and not try at all to hold on just a bite longer
because some "BOY" likes you
Boys will take a advanced of a girl because the way they can
talk makes you feel love
Like poison we drink to just feel a bite of sympathy of are need to be loved
But with all your effort of having a companion which leaves
you because the flavor of your love it's enough
you cry along notice no one is
wiping your tears
because the person you though would be there for you
is playing someone else
right in front of your eyes
but you were so dumb not to notice
because you were too busy stuck in
the trap of betrayal
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adrianware
This is a pretty nice piece. I really like how you opened my eyes and made me see a image of a broken heart girl. Nice work
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
i appreciate this poem because it opens up eyes to everyone as a community and a nation
it's about respect and decency among human beings
well done and said
Angelwith1wing
This is powerful, sis. I like that you are showing the other side of the story of a broken hearted girl when she has been used and abused to the core by some careless, wanna be player. Even though this happens a lot to teens with big hearts it should not be ignored. We need to take this message of this poem to heart so that, sisters, we won't be hurt by a player over and over again. Not only my sisters, but also my brothers who think they are all that and a bag of chips to go stepping on a sister with a big heart. Y'all need to see that you actions do affect those who love deeply and ended scarring them skin deep. I love the poem and the message. God bless you and keep writing on my friend!!!
P.S. Please check out some of my poems when you get a chance. I have new ones posted:)!