The Sun Smells To Loud

 

Have you ever smelled the sun?I mean walked Under the beaming rays and actually Smelled the sunHave to ever listened to the air?Not the wind The airSitting in the still universe and listening to the air around youHave you ever listened to a tree?Pressing your ear against the trunkListening to the heart beatHave you ever felt the evaporating dew?From the leaves in the early morningAs it leaves the ground and returns to its homeHave you ever watched the earth move?Just sitAnd you'll see your entire world rotate Along with its beauty

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