Live Another Year

Wed, 09/26/2012 - 13:07 -- Gary101

Don't worry of it
The end will not come
These theories of lies
Will root to the ground

So stop making these lies
Be happy to be around
Live another year for you

Don't believe in what they say
You have to get out of it
Or it will consume to nothing but lies
Live another year for you

All the hatred in the world
Just be you or you will be
Controlled by it and I'm
Not believe in it anymore

Live another year for you
Just be happy for you



Man, I have to say.. this definitely helped me out.. Because all day today I've been doing nothing but worrying about all kinds of stuff, that just isn't needed to really worry about, but it all has been laying on my mind heavy.. This really made me feel better.. and thank you for that.

This is the first one  I read from you, and I'm glad I gave it a chance..


Keep writing!! And if you can check some of mine out.. I just hope they don't make you too depressed. :|


Talk to you soon! 

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