Life Long Confusion

Wed, 02/05/2014 - 10:54 -- neecy95


The largest ocean in the sea
And the deadliest
For it has no island
No escape
For you will become blind
From all the sharks
Pulling your leg like no tomorrow
Only gazing at the breath 
Formed to bubbles.
But on the horizon it gets lonely too
Envious of the hearts,
Roses, chocolates, to kisses
And giving each other hugs for comfort.
Maybe not all people are
Thirsty hungry sharks
Instead they are blowfishes.
Protecting themselves from all evil from the outside.
And turned out to only be a sack of air in the inside.
This place is very confusing
And at the the same time enjoyable.



Awe :')

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