i don't wanna try too hard

he lies awake

all fucking night

until the stars disappear

from the black blue sky

damn he’s like

deathly high

these trees look like dragons

yeah they’ll have to drag him

off this branch off this rope

he ran out of gas

and out of hope

they were all watching 

you were all watching

so why did no one help

why did no one see his hell

stuck in the trap of heartbreak

stuck in this feeling he can’t shake

so he took the only out he could

and you all should


feel ashamed



this one is on you.



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