I Am Free

Boom, Boom, Boom;

The music consumes. 

I breathe it in;

I melt at its beat.

We are one.


Thump, Thump, Thump;

My feet pound the ground. 

My father and I;

Further and farther.

We are gone.


Rustle, Rustle, Rustle;

A story pulls me in.

I am the character;

And they are me.

We are whole.


Boom, Thump, Rustle;

And my thoughts disappear.

No more confusion;

And no more to do's.

I am free.

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