Fragile Whisper

You’re looking out your window tonight

So many things running through your mind

You feel like you’ve lost who you are

You want to find your way back to the start

But you can’t, oh no, you can’t


Darkness overcomes brightness in your eyes

And you’re so tired of all of their lies

You’ve been pushed around, kicked to the ground

If you need help, it’s now

You’re on your knees, crying, "Please...

Someone save me now"


You cry, cry, cry

Asking "why, why did this happen to me?"


You can’t figure out where you went wrong

It’s been so long

Since you felt like the person you wanted to be, oh

You whisper, help me, help me, help me

But no one will come and save you now


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