Do you see me?

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Hello out there!

Can you see me?

My tears, my pain,

Do you see me?

 

I'm over here!

Can you hear me?

My cries, my lies-- Suprise!

Do you hear me?

 

I'm shaking here!

Can you feel me?

My hands, my fear

Do you feel me?

 

Please...don't you see me?

I'm trying here!- why can't you hear me?

Am I just not good enough

for you to feel me?

 

Don't wait too long, now.

Please beileve me.

You should notice how,

they don't receive me.

 

 

I'll ask again--

Do you see me?

 

 
 

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