Lying next to you felt wrong, but nothing felt right these days.

 You smile at me as if you got a deal on a shiny bmw. You smile at me like you’ve won, And so far you  have. Your persistence is annoying but I am to lonely to not give myself, but you will never win it all, you will never have all of me. I’m not sure if anyone ever will.

Your eyes follow me like those of an toddler mom, Far enough away to watch to not so far to let me have my way. You would never guess that this is exactly where I want you, your eyes glued to me and you’re picking up my mess along the way. I’m surprised I’ve let you come this far.

Did I really drop that or did I just want you to pick it up Manipulation at its finest.


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