Poems from Wubzilla

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Let me start off by saying I am one of the worst writers of all time, I cannot focus and I have a hard time putting words onto paper. With that being said, I am a "super senior" which means I stayed back my senior year, why? Because I didn't have enough English credits of course! Because I just could not focus, so i wouldn't get anything done and would inevitably fail. Until I decided to use real life events as my muse. Instead of trying to make things up in my head, and trying to find a way to put it onto paper using precise words, imagery, and a whole bunch of other literary devices about something I have never even been through. Anyway, I decided to post some of my work on here, so maybe people can tell me how i did, and perhaps give me feedback. I enjoy constructive criticism, so don't be afraid to tell me what you think. I don't really know what else to put here, besides that i hope you enjoy my poems. Thank you for spending time to read this, and maybe some of my pieces. I hope you all have a superb day! ~~~ Jordan Banks
The swirling winds that-  twist the midnight sky. The stars luminesce the night. Like angels- descending from above, defending the holy...
The waves of fire, roll across the sky. The stained ebony river flows beneath the bridge, that bears witness to  a murder. And the ...
Space, the endless black abyss. A meteor racing past the stars, destination unknown, the power to shatter a planet with a forceful kiss....
Above me, the lights so bright, Underneath the artificial light. Into the distance the treadmills whirr, From thick to thin was just a...
I seen her across the room, her beauty caught my eye. I never believed in love at first sight, usually too good to be true. I needed to...

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