your body, remember

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your body,

remember not only how much you were loved and caressed

not only the beds where you lay peacefully 

but also those desires for you 

shining clearly in your eyes and trembling in a voice

and some chance

obstacle thwarted them.

Now when everything is the past,

it almost looks as if you gave yourself to those desires as well

how they shone

remember

in the eyes that looked at you, 

how they trembled for you in the voice

your body, remember

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Comments

Lavender Punkin

This poem was so beautiful. I love how you used them images of

shining eyes and a trembling voice to depict how passionate the speaker feels.

Thanks!

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for comment

im humble that you find this poem beautiful

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