Young love



Young love is the topic of discussion, heartbeat, tempo cousin of percussion.

Okay, Where do I start?

The ladies and the girls thinking men run the heart.

Independence, Coincidence, hence-

The topic of relationships.

Young girls young age, vunerable and easy.

Tight clothes belly showin' looking kind of sleezy.

Same lines, I'm like no other-

Next thing you know, pregnant tellin' mom they're a mother.

Didn't even graduate-

Yet ready to debate-

And might have a kid they might have to confiscate.

Worlds, messed up and the worlds not over.

Love is more rare than a four leaf clover.

Don't rush time, don't let time rush you.

Do the things you should do.

Rather then mess up and have no clue.

What to do-


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This legit gets strong points across, and I really like the first line.

You did good!

Pretty in Pink

wow, I really like this one.

Good work.

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