why you and i never got along
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this is why you and i never got along
you're a con-artist
you're a thief
you're a liar
you're a lowlife
you're a loser
you're the scum of the earth
you're a dirtbag
you're a really bad virus
you're a cancer
and like the cockroach that crawled in
between the bottom of the door
and the floor
you ended up in a place
you have no business in
you know what cockroaches do
they spread disease
you're a disease
and that disease is spread to love ones
but it's only a matter of time
before their eyes awaken
and true colors will be unveil
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dolvas
okay!!!!!!
wow.... um i would hate to be that person!
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
interesting comment you stated
this was more in general, nobody specific
it can be specific depending on the relationship and its outcome
check out my other poem
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hey daileye
thank you for your insight
i wanted to bring this poem to life because its lethal and potent
there is evil of all soughts, i wanted to bring this poem to life where people relate to something similar as this
i'm humble that this poem meant alot to you
have you written poems lately? we should collaborate on writing another piece together
KSOrchid39
Your poem is a riveting piece that really put unethical and greedy people into perspective. I could never be so blunt in a poem like you had pursued in this one. I most of the time use roundabout metaphors and similes to profess my hidden emotions. In this manner, I find that my descriptions are not as raw you have described yours. I shall take your hidden advice given in "Why you and I never got along" to become more blunt in my writing. :)
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thank you for your humble insight
just want to say be fearless and never bite your tongue
imprison your poem by expressing yourself freely
use metaphors, use similes, be simplistic, be abstract
poetry is an art-use poetry as that tool to express yourself with no fear
check out my other poems ok
WordSmith_15
I really like this poem. It's bittingly direct. It shows that poetry takes so many forms and you just have to figure out what works for you.
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poetry is universal
you are the authour of your poems
i dictate what i say and feel because i'm fearless-im the author of my poems and writings
i read and commented on some poems you wrote
amazing