Whats this?


whats this?

its only just a claim

whats that? 

its only just a shame

whos this?

oh shes just a ghost

a conversation with a ghost? 

yes only because a ghost listens the most?

hows that ?

this may come to surprise , but when your living in your on demise youll finally be able to break off your diguse ...

she closed her eyes...

yeah she does that only to see her complete thought all from the inside 

well im leaving , so good bye, lets hope she atleast learns to reopen one eye.



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