What could be

Fri, 10/17/2014 - 22:27 -- Illum1

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For I would take your hand in a heartbeat,

And run with you through eternity

Amongst the fields of flowing time 

Beautifully illuminated amidst our minds 

 

And as I gaze at your bewildered expression

So casually adoring your own perception 

Such child like benevolence exalts my beliefs

For I am for ever endeavoured to thee 

 

This feeling is mutual, I know this

A love so unrequitted, a constant turmoil is dealt with

Clinging to the hope that one day you might notice

That my passion burns bright, 

And together we would ignite the night 

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