Watch Me As I Fly

Sun, 05/26/2013 - 19:43 -- cpisano

Daddy, Daddy look at me
Watch me as I fly
More and more I’m gaining speed
As I soar through sky

Mommy, Mommy how I see
you below me now
I’ll come and have a looky
When I can swoop down

I can shine as bright as sun
But you’re in black as night
I’m laughing and having fun
Just muster up some might.

You are down before a rock
But don’t you see I’m fine?
You and I would play with chalk
And on playgrounds we’d climb

Now my laughter is the wind
Your cries the harmony
Together we do sing the song
Of broken family

Daddy, daddy don’t you see
I’m always by your side
I’ll be with you smiling
And I’ll never hide

Mommy, Mommy please see me
I can’t answer your why
I’ll be here till we are three
And then you’ll see me fly



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