War
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They said that I'd be fine
And I believed it to be true
Until at the next moment
My eyes fell upon you
My heart began to beat off rhythm
As my vision became blind
They said that people could change
And that stayed in my frame of mind
I just wanted to be happy
Praying that my loneliness would soon fade away
So I put my heart and my soul into loving you
Crying eyes out in my soon dismay
One side of me said not to give up
That this young heart will soon mend
The other side told me to walk away
And let my unappreciated love end
But throughout it all, it still pains me
To feel both sides pull me this way and that
Because I know who you could be
Do you see where I'm trying to get at?
See I'm a girl that's smart but makes foolish mistakes
And cherished the moments that God gives me
But sometimes I want for people to stay in my life
Longer than the few moments that they're destined to be
My heart is slowly growing weak
As life continuously knocks me to my knees
I'm fighting in a war
Where the only opponent...is me
-Geovanni
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Geovanni, I think your poem was really interesting! The ending caught me off guard in a good way! Your poem seems to tell a sad story about love and how hard it is to move on after all of the happy moments fade away. You did a great job at conveying this meaning. Great work! Keep writing and being creative! Often, it is the sad moments in life that provoke the most emotion out of us and inspire us to write!