"STOP BULLYING"

This isn't technically a poem but this should be seen:

These past few days I have been very upset and depressed. So I went on youtube and watched a bunch of videos about people overcoming bullying. Two of these girls killed themselves and they are Amanda Todd and Amanda Cota. They both were beautiful girls with huge hearts. But kids decided to bring them down and hurt them to the point of them hurting themselves. I have been bullied since kindergarten. Its been from as minor to verbal teasing to sexual harassment and physical bullying. I have thought that I was worthless and everyone would have been much happier if I was gone. I started self harming. My friends found out and they told my mom. Ive been in counseling since I was ten. This is my fifth new counselor and fourth new school. I really want it to be different here. Please comment on this because this is a true story from my life. These two girls and so many others have let themselves succumb their bullies opinions and hatred. They are beautiful people who are loved by many people. May they are rest in peace. Bullying hurts and it really breaks a person down. Like my favorite song says, "You shoot me down but I won't fall, I am titanium." It might be too late for those girls and guys that are gone, but we can prevent people from following their pattern. Just remember that everyone is loved and they should never end their life. Keep calm and hold on. <3

Comments

savigirl14

This was hard to share. Please comment or critique. It is always appreciated

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

let me tell you something

you are courageous in sharing your story

no one doesn't deserve to be bully

its about acceptance, i accept you for you( believe me when i say that)

i'll continue to read yourk work

check out my poems

 

also- i have an idea, let's collaborate on a poem about bullying

we need to resonate the importance of bullying and its affect

what do you say?

savigirl14

I think thats a great idea. I would love to collaborate with you. We will figure out some ideas and I think. it will turn out great.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

let's exchange emails

whats your email address?

savigirl14

Hey I am so sorry but my mom said I can't do this. It's just my mom doesn't want people I don't know to have my contact info. I'm only fifteen so my mom just wants to be cautious. I hope you can understand. But I have a couple ideas if you want to use the comments to transfer them.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

i understand

i'm a power poetry mentor-my priority is to support and encourage poets to express themselves

i'm actually stating a project of collabprating with poets to write poems together

i collaborated with about 4-5 poets

inform your mom that i'm a power poetry mentor so there is no misunderstanding

 

share me your ideas so we can begin the process of collaborating a poem together

savigirl14


I was thinking of doing a duo between a bully and a victim. I am in speech so I know what to write. Maybe it will open people's eyes to the situation and how bad it is.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

write the idea in a poetic way and i'll compliment it with a verse

 

write your verse

Angelwith1wing

I was bullied most of my life because of my appearance. I began having these suicidal thoughts that drain out all of my strength and happiness. I couldn't see my way out of the darkness until God found me. Call me a Jesus Freak, but once I had a purpose in life to live for God forever and ever, the suicidal thoughts went away and I became stronger. I became a survivor of depression and a fighter for my life and happiness. Sharing your story with others really did help me to see how far I have come and how much I need to fight for not only my life, but others. I want you to know that God and I are in the fight with you along with so many others to end bullying. Prayers go out to all those who lost there lives to suicide and to those who have been bullied. God bless you and keep writing on my friend(:!!! 

kimsalina

They both were wonderful young ladies with colossal hearts. Anyway, children chose to cut them down and hurt them to the point of them harming themselves. I have been harassed since kindergarten. Its been from as minor to verbal teasing to inappropriate behavior and physical tormenting. Essay writing

jhonaddison1

Pleasant things to learn and make a vicinity in the business sector to set new values in the business. Need someone to write a paper for me

savigirl14

This is a very good article thank you for writing it. Always remember if you believe that you're a sinner and that Jesus died on the cross for your sins then greater is he that is in you than he that is in the world

savigirl14

This is a very good article thank you for writing it. Always remember if you believe that you're a sinner and that Jesus died on the cross for your sins then greater is he that is in you than he that is in the world

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