Soul in a Coma
My soul's in a coma;
and no body knows.
i act like i'm fine.
but i'm broke to the bone.
this meat sac is hollow.
can you see past my eyes?
my body'll follow.
from this life, i resign.
This poem is about:
Me
My family
My soul's in a coma;
and no body knows.
i act like i'm fine.
but i'm broke to the bone.
this meat sac is hollow.
can you see past my eyes?
my body'll follow.
from this life, i resign.
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