she's changed

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10458
United States
40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

that night she ran from cops
that night she was hit with numerous felony charges
that night her rap sheet was longer than my arm
that night she carried a piece
that night she cried as she was carried away with handcuffs
that night she made 3g's with her running mate aka her boyfriend
that night her boyfriend was shot and killed maliciously like a wild beast
that night she shed tears while locked up behind bars
that night all the demons were cast away from her soul
that night she asked god forgiveness for the sins she committed
that night she told her mom to give up on her
that night her mom caressed her face and say i love you
that night her mom stuck by her
her mom meant everything she said and did
that night was the last time she broke every rule
that night she was let go
that night she ran to her mother
that night she hugged her mother
that night when nothing else mattered
that night her mom yelled at her to live a better life
that night she stayed off the street and went straight home
that night her mom inspired her about the importance of life and how she can aspire young girls
that night all charges were dropped
that night her and her mom got on their hands and knees to pray
that night she told her mom that she is going back to school and pursue her high school diploma
that night her mom was proud of her
that night, her mom told before she went to sleep that she loves her
that night was the night she changed

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Spresswood88

That was a very vivid and easy to get drawn into with such interest!

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wordiotter

inspiration. truly powerful

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