The shadows

"The shadows are long

The shadows are dark

They always lurk

They leave no mark 

The shadows are big

The shadows are deep

The shadows fall

As the world sleeps

The shadows return

The shadows revenge 

Light must relearn

Darkness seeps to your head."

This poem is about: 
Our world



Tell me how to improve, i feel like the world has stared at me as i gathered the courage to step out of the shadows and when i did all there was: was silence. no words of if i was stupid: brave to step out: if i was a coward. anything is better than silence so please, just tell me what you think because truely this is all of me, every small shattered piece.~Seawolf

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