Rejected

Location

60475
United States
41° 28' 18.5376" N, 87° 37' 24.8664" W

I don't like it,
I don't like it at all,
I'm expected but not allowed,
Yelled at but not expected,
Kicked out but still accepted,
Not accepted but still rejected,
Cared for but still rejected,
I hate this feeling,
This feeling of rejection,
It's hard to accept,
Harsh reality,
The truth,
I don't want to hear it,
But yet, I do so I'll know,
Know what you really think,
I'd rather know the truth,
Than hear it from someone else,
Reject me if you wish,
But tell me the truth.

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

sad that you been rejected for whatever reason it is

must find that inspiration to help you get through rough times

keep writing

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