Purity: Or, A Reflection; Aftermath

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29607
United States
34° 48' 30.204" N, 82° 20' 3.6168" W

In my childhood
I climbed holly trees and magnolia.
Innocence was a summer day
Locked outside with your bicycle;
Locked outside with the water hose;
Locked inside your room.

It's late, and lightning
Is the only thing lighting
Up the room.

In my childhood
I picked flowers and drew them
With the butterflies still feeding
Climbing down from magnolia trees
I descend down to the patch of grass.
It's out here I learn beauty dies
But we still suck out what's left.

I've grown up since
Those branches broke beneath me.
My beauty isn't dead yet.

Comments

Loren Bell

This is so good!!!

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