Listen To My Voice

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I am traveling somewhere in this poem. If you can't figure it out, the answer will be in small print at the bottom right.

 

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Truly, I did the most I could do.

Oh, how the prophecy can fail

if you fail to make the right choice.

I feel like a necklace is being ripped

from my neck. Just like the soul of the human being

was ripped from God.

 

In these miserable, purple garments I law here.

These dry spikes are like the hearts

of the Jewish people. My people. My children.

Why is my garment drenched in blots?

You ridicule me loudly, but I reply in silence.

 

As this prison gets smaller, my heart for the providence

grows. Truly, I did the most I could do.

 

Traveling location: Jesus's Crown of Thorns

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