My Heart break

My sorrow
Like a tidal wave of pain,
Pounding me so hard
Its difficult to stay sane.
The tumbling chaos of my soul,
Burst up and fill my eyes
And for a moment all i can see is darkness.

My own heart break,
Like a red tundra of unmoving blank.
My own execution,
Like a force unfurling and lashing my entire being.
My own blackout,
Like black clouds sweeping
Back and forth
Back and forth
Ringing with the truth of my own heart break

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