From Mortgage to More J's

Thu, 01/30/2014 - 17:31 -- abrimah


How could one shirt

Be different from another?

A name

Can change the game, my naive brotha .


How could my pants

Bring me such shame?

An extra sharp design

Could take your pants from cool to lame.


My hat? 

Come on, you can't be forreal.

It Ain't Ralph though

Thats just how I feel.


I walk on dirt with my shoes

Why should they cost so much.?

If they're not the newest release

Then you didn't  spend enough.


My outfits

Will never

Cost more then my house.


Then I guess

You haven't

Got the game figured out.





Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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