Love Broken Down

Thu, 07/20/2017 - 09:58 -- Neftee

There are so many things

I will never be able to express.

But you are beutiful like stars are beutiful.

Your laugh sounds like a gentle stream

over pretty little River rocks.

Your touch feels like the first rain

over a Californian desert

and my skin prickles with joy like the cacti do in their sandy beds.

But your love feels like a flood.

It breaks down my walls like you wouldn't even believe.

I love you darling

I will for eternity.


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