living in a dream

Wed, 11/25/2020 - 06:05 -- azco

I'm living in a dream,

Save me!

I want to wake up,

I hate being in this dream,

It's so dark here,

I hate this night, 

I want to wake up,

save me!

I can't bear it,

listening to my own thoughts, 

giving me chills to my bones,

give me your hand,

I need your love to end this dream. 

I'm lying here,

waiting for you to,

save me!

 

~yamuka

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