Inescapable Torment

Fri, 05/31/2013 - 02:10 -- nahokoh


United States
37° 25' 3.9216" N, 122° 7' 24.618" W

not long ago you brushed me off
without a care in the world
about your words with thorns

This deceiving hell
burning to the touch
UNBEARABLE suffering
the Dreaded feeling

chills erupt
with just a glance
broke me down
in more ways than one

left me to doubt
Everything I had
Everything I earned
Everything I craved
everything inside


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