You were my sunshine and i used to be your moon,
My revolution was around earth yet glowed only for you.
An elliptical love circle, that never meant to end soon,
As I have belief in our love's photon stew.

The earth ignited me from shining,
Hide you from me to glow.
Yet the hope inside still lighting,
Which helped me to grow.

I believ you're beautiful,
The scars ornamented on face.
All flaws made you wonderful,
That belief shall never fade.

You showerd light, as love on me,
priceless things as gift, that never comes free,
True love in those cares, is what i see,
Your light will glow along with this poetry.

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This is a beautiful poem, you forgot the "e" at the end of believe 

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