I Waited in the Rain

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I waited in the rain 
On the front steps of your door.
I knocked, furiously
I begged you to let me in.

I waited in the rain,
for days and nights.
Cold and fevered,
I knocked, furiously
I begged you to let me in.

I waited in the rain,
I needed you to save me.
I knocked, furiously
until my knuckles split.
I begged you to let me in.

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