Good Bye! Sincerely; A victim

Tue, 09/03/2013 - 22:31 -- tyte123

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Good Bye!

Sincerely; A victim

 

 Yes I am sitting here with no confidence

yes I let there words get under my wing

but why i am still sitting here with a knife

with my lifeline hanging on a string

 

I can just cut the string

It wont make a difference anyway

allot of people will say do not and disagree

but what else are they going to say

 

There going to act like they are there for you

"no, there is better things you can do"

"don't take your life away"

"theres help for people like you"

 

Like ME! Excuse me

you think i chose for this to happen

You think i want to be bullied

beat down on, and forgotten

 

I do not want to be the victim 

I am tired of running and hiding behind the door

I want to go home now

even if I'm lying down upon the floor

 

Sometimes the bad guy wins 

because i let there words get under my wing

but guess what

I am not longer sitting here with a knife and my life line on a string

 

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Comments

savigirl14

Its really good

MissLove means EVERYTHING_LA

I give you my respect ... I know how it feels ive been in that place before I know how it feels when people act like they're there for you...i give you all my respect

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