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33° 35' 50.4492" N, 112° 6' 26.1108" W

Remember that day he left you
When he left you and he flew
He said we will be together forever
That nothing can come between you ever

Yes, that day
He never meant it that way
To break your heart like that
All this year of you feeling betrayed
He left you because he was afraid

What would you say?
If he comes here and asks for forgiveness
On his own way
You know, he still cares

Then here I am asking for forgiveness
Would you say yes?

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