Ghostly Haiku

Beneath your bed hides,

My sorrowful ghostly eyes.

Be still, he who breathes.

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Wired6

Nathan,you are clearly a talented,passionate creative Soul,capable of 

moving readers alike. Your poems speak 2 others sweetly.

The nuances,subtlety, of your words are slick!

I'm guessing that you'd also be very proficient at humorous poetry also.

Anyway,I shan't go on! Except 2 say,

I always enjoy reading your work.

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Wired6

BTW,have u ever thought of script writing?

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Nathan3259

Awww thank you! I have never really thought about script writing. I generally feel as though I understand thoughts more so than conversation, but it would definitely be fun to try. Also, I haven't written a humorous poem in quite a while, perhaps I will do that sometime as well :-)

Wired6

You're more than welcome Nathan! X

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