Five in the Morning

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 It is five in the morning as twilight sheds tears down my face,

The dancing horizon teases my mourning

eyes yearning for sorrow

But bleeding condescending sympathy

 

The sun rays invade,

Relax my cells and tingle tender shakes

of ignorance,

malnutrition,

anorexia,

darkness,

invisibleness,

gone.

 

it is five in the morning as superfluous darkness screams into my ears,

The ocean is half empty,

My lung is half full

my heart is half empty,

Half full basic,

acidic,

atrocious,

empty,

gone.

 

Its five in the morning

The sun begins to rise

Warms every inch of my body,

But for some reason i am always cold

Always gone.

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