False Spring

dawn comes late today -

afternoon’s glow crystallized

in brilliant hoarfrost.

premature bloom’s frozen death,

lovely, buoyant hope’s demise.

Comments

Ma'at

11 years ago

This is a beautiful piece. Keep it up. It gave me the mental image of a pure white rose being frozen over before it achieved full bloom..

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