Dull

Location

All else seems bright and sharp

Clear in my sight

Lost in my thought

How could it be?

No matter how close I get,

The less I can see

My focus is off

No longer on point

Good for nothing

Nothing is good

Back on point

Focused

Alas, I can see

Though I am far

How could I have been

Lost in my thought

It is all clear in my sight

Bright and sharp

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