On this dark, cloudy dayI

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On this dark, cloudy day
I look and see myself lying by the river
Looking so cold
I can practically taste the chill

Wearing soggy clothes
With pale grey eyes
The sweet sun I always knew
Is not to be seen again

The fight is finally over
Heaven will not accept me
And I must

Know that I did all I could
But always knowing where I would end up
Maybe I did everything
Maybe I just messed up

Never to breathe the stars again
Never to see their shining wishes
If only I had no scars

I wish I cared more
But I am already forgotten

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