Change I'd Like to See.


United States
30° 4' 29.4492" N, 82° 45' 22.644" W

I just want to change someones state of mind.
Everyday brings me one step closer to being outta time.
I'm sick and tired of everyone acting like this is such a crime.
Maybe if you weren't your own enemy and had a open mind,
these objection to a false reality,
may begin to hold a different fallacy.
I'm trying to prove this point while being so kind.
Now let me show you this new design,
and you will be amazed at what you may find.


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