( the bubble )


United States
41° 47' 51.4176" N, 87° 58' 39.2844" W

there aimlessly floating
above cranium
slowly envel( o p i n g
mind to airy delirium

grasped and clenched
then stole presence.
so no longer occupy
space around: the reality you deny

.this ( ) has you
walls painted shades of blue
dreams and fantasies
from a consciousness snatched

each thought vivid
taking further away
. now your own world so lucid
)H e y! *

What’d you say?
O .

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